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| This was a cover featuring a door (a photo my daughter took at the Boldt Castle) was a R. Warren contest submission, not an actual cover used by R. Warren. |
Do you want to write fiction? Do you want to write a memoir that includes storytelling?
During the lockdown of the COVID-19 Pandemic, I've taken to learning how to write a story or a memoir. This is a change for me because not only do I not write fiction or stories, I don't read them often either.
Some might think that makes me shallow. Perhaps so. I find some of the descriptive parts of fiction tedious. But as I've been learning, I understand how they help bring a reader into a scene.
To grow in my learning of how to add description I've done five things.
First, I wrote my story including all events I wanted to be included.
Second, I searched online for articles on adding sensory descriptions to stories. I learned about the importance of creating a visual, an aroma, a texture (touch), and sound. These details are easy to read about, but not always as easy to capture.
Third, I visited websites that give examples of show, don't tell.
Fourth, I pulled some of my husband's fiction books off the shelf and also a few from my daughter's old room. I sat with a notebook and Post-it notes. I looked for examples in these books that might describe parts of my story.
For instance, for a scene where I'm confronting someone, I looked for the same type of scene in the fiction books.
Then, I took notes or put a Post-it note on the page to hold the spot. I returned to my story inserting something similar. I didn't copy exactly what the book said, but I used it as an example and worded it to fit my character.
Fifth, I realized my daughter's books weren't helpful as they pertained to fantasy and unreal worlds mostly. I'd need another avenue for this exercise.
So I took to Amazon. I searched some memoirs for sale that have the "search inside" feature.
This was fun. I was able to glimpse into so many books! I could even use my keyboard to search for certain words like "farm" or "disappointed".
I borrowed several examples to put into my story, again rewording lest I be accused of plagiarism. (My examples were far different enough.)
At one point, I put my story through an online tool called ProWritingAid. It didn't like several of the words I'd used. It suggested I used too many words in some sections.
On editing, I went through my story again, adding more texture and reworking the story as we always do when editing.
This has been a very fun and helpful exercise to help me increase my storytelling ability. Even when I write nonfiction, I often tell small stories. I am better prepared now.
